Lovers' Veil

Amazing writing!!

I could not put it down....Without question, the BEST read on this site to date.

Completley amazing. I loved every minute of this story. I would love to have a hard copy of it :)

Very Good Stuff

This story was a cross between fantasy genre fiction, and great erotic moments. Keep it up man!

Amazing Story! (:

I simply loved this story. It had romance, love and most importantly detailed descriptions of the love making the characters made! This story kept me in suspence and made me very horny. Please continue to write! You excite my wet pussy :P

Ugh

I was really getting into the story until page 5. I found it far too annoying that it seems the princess is far stronger than the prince. The princess has threaten death, going against her farther, to not marry while the prince, who claims to be entranced by the princess, allows his farther to order him to have sex with the two women (which then resulting in an orgy with the other guy...) which the princess then sees through the mirror.

It just doesn't make sense and bode well with me that this is the story.

The writing was well done so thanks for posting. It's just not for me.