All Comments on 'The Office'

i hope that's only chapter 1.....

Got as far as maybe half the first page. Just past the part where you started the story all over again, But noticed that not only were you repeating the first part all over again, before the weekend you were married a few years. But when you came back to work you had been married 10 years. Sorry the hashing over the same things over and the time gap almost made me stop. BUT when I read the "My husband doesn't pay me any attention" line I knew it was time to stop reading. Little hint, providing you and your children with foor and shelter and clothing is kind of like paying attention. And in typical female fashion he never notices you all is his fault right? And you never mentioned these problems have you? No of course not because he should KNOW that there is a problem right, shouldn't have to tell him. Lesbian couple must be the happiest in the world, don't have to talk can just use the magical ESP that you women wish we men have to communicate .

Of women writers giving excusess for cheating, there is none. If your this unhappy do something positive about it or get a divorce. Any guy that finds this a turn on is a idiot, hated this story.

Unlike the other comments, i liked it. It was very interesting and you should write more. Dont let negative comments stop you. Keep going.

I agree that you should keep writing. I liked your story and I would like to see more...

Don't you females EVER talk to your husbands? I guess not. Otherwise you wouldn't fuck around on your marriages.

i did think it was quite good, and i think the writer was trying to stress that her husband never gave her any attention sexualy

this si the firs story that got me from start to finish was very good and i thoroughly enjoyed it, maybe you rushed the ending though ?

Your going to cheat with some asshole lawyer instead of fixing your marriage, to be honest the auther is the real asshole, trying to justify this shit, fix it or end it, but have some morals and some class.

If your husband isn't getting you off and you don't love him anymore then let him go. Get divorced and become the single slut you want to be.

Love your descriptions and how the story flows. Please keep writing.

I love any woman when they wear pantyhose. Don't care what color. Most woman today don't wear pantyhose any more. That's too bad. There nothing like a great pair of legs, sorry for that, in pantyhose or tights. I love your office story. Hope there is more.

A hose lover!

This is one of the rare, in fact, too rare stories that we need more of. Blantant sex is one thing, but the sexiness in this story lies in the tease. Please write, at least, a sequel and even cosider making it a series. You can always involve other folks. One fantasy would be to bring in clients, both male and female, to enjoy the fun.

..... comments .... i really enjoyed your story

I enjoyed the story very much but suggest the very beginning is a pit awkward, almost sounds as if certain sentences are repeated. I did enjoy how you can have a nice enjoyable story without the "hardcore" portions so many other stories seem to concentrate on. Please continue.

This is another example of how sexy pantyhose can be! Keep writing and we'll most certainly keep reading and commenting!

Love the way you prolong the excitement, the anticipation of what's coming next...

You are a talented writer...your erotic literature is tops in my book.

Pleeezzz keep writing.

i was sooooo excited as i read could nearly feel them myself!

Chapter Two, please!

some idiot commenters!

your stories are very well done, and a lot of fun.

please don't stop!

I didn't want it to end.

Great story. Great author. This seemed like a rough draft that needs proof reading. Please correct and resubmit. Then write us next chapter. So erotic.

My first wife teased like that all the time. She would wear sheer nude to the waist pantyhose without panties and let men see whatever their eyes could behold. She worked in an insurance off ice and often went out with her boss or a client.

Merciful Heavens! Edit your material! Your plot seems hot and sexy. I just couldn't get past the way you would modify paragraphs, and then leave both paragraphs in. Sometimes more than once on the same topic. Please keep trying, but perhaps you could find someone to look over your work and offer editorial suggestions.

The sexual tension in this story was amazing. You need to write part 2 .