All Comments on 'My Family's Nudist Colony? Ch. 17'

The story has finally started to come together. More installments, please. This has been one of the better chapters in this series.

You have received dozens of critical comments, which you have quickly erased, pointing out your disrespect of writing conventions. This chapter continues the abuse of English you seem so proud to inflict.

Love it so far but the chapters need to be "bigger" "longer" Keep writing.

As one of your programs, I might suggest some sex demonstrations.

Also, how about more bisexual situations between women and between men

Good job with this chapter but the sex at the end seems very hurried, ether do it right or don't at all.