I hope you continue this story, with Zelena going to London. You still have the writing skills for erotica--like the storytelling in "A French Honeymoon" under Erotic Couplings, still one of your best.
Intrigued.
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A new character emerges.
I hope you continue this story, with Zelena going to London. You still have the writing skills for erotica--like the storytelling in "A French Honeymoon" under Erotic Couplings, still one of your best.
Intrigued.
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Back to Zelena's Story Ch. 01 or
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