All Comments on 'Getting Over Edie Ch. 01'

i've missed your stories. it's good to see you haven't lost any skills.

I always love your stories. And I can already tell this one is gonna gave me just as hooked.

the chapters longer! You have a great start, but to get into any story of length as this seems to be going, you need to allow for more development of both character and plot and for the reader to ejoy it. Too many writers think that making the reader wait creates suspense. But that only creates irritation. In a book a reader to read as much or as little as he chooses. You need to make the chapters much longer to get into the story. Please

Excellent job. No complaints from me. You nailed it.

Like the slow revelation of the characters. Sounds like men I know as well.

this sounds so much like my brother, I have a lump in my throat & tears in my eyes. After witnessing the pain & self-torture he went through because of what his bush-pig-hooker-slut of an ex did, I hated seeing him so disconnected from everything. And yes, he turned into a fat, ol' stinky caveman too. Who would have thought that it would take my baby daughter to change all that & mend his broken heart. Can't wait to see how this story pans out...

I am sooooo happy you are back. I am loving the new story and I can not wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work, from a devote fan always. =)

I've been itching for a new read from you for a while. I can tell this one will be rather interesting, can't wait. . Much love!

I wish I could tell you how happy I was when I logged in today and saw a story from you. esp after you trashed the last one(which i had really liked)

this one's different...a guy's pov am loving it already!!

You finally came back!!! and "Getting Over Edie" was the shit!!! Please update soon

I just screamed out loud when I was that you back here . So welcome back !!!! This story already has me Hooked , can't wait for more . Update soon PLEASE !!!

and youre not missin a beat!! loving the characters loving the story, keep it up, cant wait for more :D

I love how this is from a guys point of view. its different from the typical girl waiting for her knight and shinning armor and it's refreshing to have something new come. the mystery of what Edie did is actually getting to me too! i can not wait to find out [if you do let us know]. im loving the story and the characters and can not wait for the next chapter! :] hope you update soon ; i just can not wait! [ahh! haha]

Thank you. I have checked your page constantly to see if you were working on anything. This is very different but still really good. A guys perspective is very new and necessary. I cant wait to see how their voice is played out.

Poor baby, i feel so sorry for him and it's only the first chapter. So glad you're back. I'm a total nerd4music junkie. you even put me on the some great ass music (for which i freaking love you). Can't wait for more darling!!!

You are ummmayyziing :)

I love Grady <3

I hope he gets better, and you stick with this - this new view is interesting and essential for A LOT of women.

Yesterday I read an article on getting a guys attention, and the goal was just to treat them like dogs - I'm telling you now, that really sickened me.

Anyway, rant over, and please keep it up!

Interesting characters. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Loved it great job. Hurry back.

....never read author before but impressed. What started out appearing to be an assumed and "borrowed" dialogue style settled down into a first-class exhibition of the vernacular. Want to hear more from reader who's daughter healed her brother's broken heart. Am I in the Wrong subsection?

Glad to see you're back. I'm looking forward to following this story.

Sooooooooo gald your back , I love it and I love Grady. I can't wait till next chapter!

Just like everyone else glad to read something new, can't wait to see how the story develops :)

I love how this started and I cant wait for the next installment.

ure back!! lovin this story so far...cant wait for more!!!

I LOVE IT!

can't wait for more.

Please bring more.

So Far So Good!

You have a way with dialogue that I envy. Also, you're able to create a kind of relationship between the boys that doesn't seem stiff or fake, which can happen sometimes when written from a female perspective. Thank you for a great read.

Great start and lots of laugh out loud moments. The Harry Potter comments had me cackling.

I love it! It's got all the good bits a story should have. Awesome characters!

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