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FAB!!!
its been a long time coming but glad your continuing with the story. Update soon!!!
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This is a ten star story even. i love it...dont make us wait for the next one too long
Fantastic
Misted part one when first posted, so just desided to read part 1 & 2 at the same time, bring on the next part soom please
nice!!
please don't take so long for the next update, this is so good!
Great stuff
Keep em coming!
hot
combustion at its highest level
whoa!!!
wow!! 4 years before you continued this one? it was indeed a long time. good you are back. please update soonest!!! ;)
Beautiful
It is something to be brought up through the whole story from beginning to end. The teasing in your writing was driving me crazy. I loved it so much . thanks for writing this.
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hurry please
waiting impatiently for the next update! this story is so sweet.
Loved it!
I loved these first two chapters. You wrote in a way that a reader could feel the immediate chemistry between the characters and made it ok that there wasn't a courtship first. Daniel is sexy as the aggressor, but I'm glad that Cat called him out on it as it creates more conflict and is, in my opinion, more realistic.She's attracted to his power and authority, but at the same time commands respect in her own right. I also love to write and I know that it's hard to tell when you're writing a love scene whether your reader can feel the sexual tension and whether you've struck the right balance of detail and description of passion. You've done a great job of creating sexual tension and chemistry here and your reader experiences it right along with the characters. I hope you keep going with this story - I'd love to read more!
Wow, way hot!
The heat factor exceeded the temperature limits--something is going to blow soon. I think we all know what it is. Good story. Please don't wait so long to complete Chapter 3.
Ooooooh I LOVE IT!
I love the intensity of it all!
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