In the Witching Hour

Wow! The Yeats quote was a wonderful cap to your story. Your descriptive art is smooth-

and to be envied. A great job, with two verys. I not only enjoyed it, I could definitely picture it in my minds eye. Again thanks for the Yeats quote, as I like to give jewelry to daughters and lady friends. I shall use that in a few days, and collect the reward for myself. Attribute to Yeats and hugs and kisses to me- sounds fair.

Beautiful

You give me the resolve to keep searching and reading Lit stories. Just when it seems that I am vanishing into a cess pool of arrant mediocracy I come across you. It's as if I really do find what's at the end of the rainbow.

Thanks Cat, it was beautiful.

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Needs to be longer with some depth to it. One page isn't going to do it. Make it a minimum of 3 pages, preferably longer.

Fascinating. :)