why do you writers insist on posting stories before they are ready never ever post a story without going through an editor first you used way to many wrong words,miss spelled words and there were a lot of missing words get an editor and do a rewrite and never post a story again without going through a good editor first
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Anonymous03/11/10
Good
I thought it was good.
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Anonymous03/15/10
Good, with some intuitive understanding
I thought the story was pretty good, all things considered. Don't let the Grammar Police get under your skin. They need to remember to space after a comma, and also understand the difference between to, too, and two. And they had the nerve to give you advice, when their (not they're, or there) advice was chock full of grammatical errors. You know, the kind that a competent editor or editing program would be able to spot. Slow down a little on the lead up and the crescendo will be more than just a climax, if you get my meaning. Stay with it!
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Anonymous06/28/10
editor please
never ever post a story with out going through a good editor first show some pride in your work and respect for the readers
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Anonymous12/03/11
big sis let me ride
my big sister let me bent over and let me pull up her dress pull down her pantys and slide my dick in her and fuck her while she looked out for my other sisters that was when i was younger i want to fuck her now but dont know to ask/help
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Anonymous12/03/11
Jesus
The shit that gets published here.
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Anonymous08/06/13
What a shit!!
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Anonymous08/15/13
Before you write another word, find a dictionary and look up two things--spelling and grammar!! Until you know what both mean and how to use them, don't even go near a keyboard much less try to use one!! Atrocious!
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Anonymous06/06/14
Medical Aspects of Human Sexuality with Alcohol
At least one large glass of wine and 11 shots of vodka each. He got it up and they both got off. Interesting. That belongs in a medical journal.
English
editor please
why do you writers insist on posting stories before they are ready never ever post a story without going through an editor first you used way to many wrong words,miss spelled words and there were a lot of missing words get an editor and do a rewrite and never post a story again without going through a good editor first
Good
I thought it was good.
Good, with some intuitive understanding
I thought the story was pretty good, all things considered. Don't let the Grammar Police get under your skin. They need to remember to space after a comma, and also understand the difference between to, too, and two. And they had the nerve to give you advice, when their (not they're, or there) advice was chock full of grammatical errors. You know, the kind that a competent editor or editing program would be able to spot. Slow down a little on the lead up and the crescendo will be more than just a climax, if you get my meaning. Stay with it!
editor please
never ever post a story with out going through a good editor first show some pride in your work and respect for the readers
big sis let me ride
my big sister let me bent over and let me pull up her dress pull down her pantys and slide my dick in her and fuck her while she looked out for my other sisters that was when i was younger i want to fuck her now but dont know to ask/help
Jesus
The shit that gets published here.
What a shit!!
Before you write another word, find a dictionary and look up two things--spelling and grammar!! Until you know what both mean and how to use them, don't even go near a keyboard much less try to use one!! Atrocious!
Medical Aspects of Human Sexuality with Alcohol
At least one large glass of wine and 11 shots of vodka each. He got it up and they both got off. Interesting. That belongs in a medical journal.
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