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Does anybody like it?
Seems no one is leaving any comments about the stories. If no one enjoy's the stories I'll stop now. On the other hand if you do like the progress so far please jot a quick note, or leave any story ideals. I am thinking of doing one or two more in this line; only if I get some word that you all want it. Thank you for all the votes and for the comments on the first story, really does mean a lot to know others enjoy the "other side" sometimes as well.
Shit
Slimy.
Keep writing!
You know, you should just ignore the idiot one-word comments. This story is hot as hell, and unusual in the perspective of a female voyeur.
I for one, want more.
DreamerIncolore
Hot, Hot, Hot!!
Truly hot. Give us more. Agreat style.
TOO SHORTS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Why too short stories?, and part one never ended. you just left us hanging. If you still read these comments, how did Carol and Tim explain her sitting on his lap. Also him not getting up to greet her. loose ends. .........LAROC OF AGES
Criticism
If you want feedback, then let me just say your stories are fine, but your writing is very clunky. You also need to work on your dialogue.
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