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The ending????
HOw I hate this story to end. However, you have offered a very concise if brief epilogue. I still wonder what happened to Malka and her boyfriend as well as to her spiritual journey. This whole saga has been most enjoyable. Thank you for writing it.
Superb
By far the best story that i have read on Literotica. Easily good enough to be a published book (better than many that I have read). Well done.
Excellent story
Thank you for sharing this here. It was truly a great story.
Great story!
I've been following your stories, and been enjoying your other website. (BTW, to the commenter wondering what happened to Malka Chorno, Caligula's website features another story, with a glimpse of what happened to Malka and her boyfriend).
Please write more, I'm looking forward to them.
You wound it up -
nicely. Thanks. I would have enjoyed more detail in the intervening years but - I understand that you had to end somewhere. Your imagination impresses me. Thanks again!
A Shame
Its a real shame that this had to end. One of the best Stories I have read in a long time. All power to your writing hand
What more can I say?
All the previous comments are to the point and I agree with them. A work of imagination and scope, beautifully executed. Well done!
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