Enjoyable and different. Mind you i found the Julie/Jim shit annoying especially when it had two jims. Would of been more enjoyable without that. Made it difficult to read.
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Anonymous04/13/11
Spellcheck doesn't guarantee you the right word.
It's principal, not principle. A principal is the top school administrator. A principle is a rule or code to go by. Also, you seem very down on men. Some of us do support our children and do not abuse or cheat on our wives.
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Anonymous01/14/13
Hot but short
You had a lot of potential before you went off on a tangent about the mother and the principal and the 'night decision' thing...this could have been a series to be honest with you.
English
Julie/Jim?
Julie/Jim really annoyed me, if he wants to be known by a female name just use Julie, the 'technique' made the story frustrating to read
Interesting
Enjoyable and different. Mind you i found the Julie/Jim shit annoying especially when it had two jims. Would of been more enjoyable without that. Made it difficult to read.
Spellcheck doesn't guarantee you the right word.
It's principal, not principle. A principal is the top school administrator. A principle is a rule or code to go by. Also, you seem very down on men. Some of us do support our children and do not abuse or cheat on our wives.
Hot but short
You had a lot of potential before you went off on a tangent about the mother and the principal and the 'night decision' thing...this could have been a series to be honest with you.
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