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by Anonymous

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by 03/04/10

Utterly rivetting

This is a very fine piece of writing indeed, well managed and developed. The focus is very fine, the details intricate. There is a magnetic quality to the eroticism in this story that is very arousing. The only slight impediment was a few typos and misspellings that were irritating especially when the focus is so concentrated. A really enjoyable story. Thank you! Collared_dirtygirl.

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by Anonymous01/20/12

Wow

More please! I want to know what Dave has in mind for Marion and Paul, if anything.

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by vqfarrold01/21/12

Re 'Wow'

There is a sequel - 'Tell me' - but I'm afraid it's not the scenario you are looking for.

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