All I've got to say is that I can't wail till the party!!!!
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Anonymous02/25/10
I like the story
I like the way it goes slowly. Only don't include more people like Rita or Linda when Owen haven't had his cock inside Beckey's pussy yet. How about the shy Bridget, She could be included later on. And it would be nice if there are some humor included with sniffing of soiled panties, inhaling the women's musky pussy scent from the crotch of their panties and Becky get's embarrassed but excited.
Far from boring! You have a very interesting style. I envy your way with conversation. I like the way the women treat the naked male so casually. I hope you can keep it up! Well worth the effort, thanks
The Parisian interlude seemed a little wedged-in, but the rest of the story builds at a very enjoyable tempo. I can't wait for more.
And, IMHO, this is boring only in the sense that a drill might bore its way into a nice fresh hole. I'm looking forward to more of that kind of boring.
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Anonymous03/10/10
great stuff!
keep it going, please, and ignore all the negative b-s - this is very good writing, rich in detail, taking its time to get to the good stuff and keeping it real in terms of relationship and personality. reaaly enjoyed the second part, can't wait for more stories! thanks a lot!
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Anonymous05/23/10
fuckin lucky owen
From Brisbane. This entire series is senfuckinsational, and I loved it.
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Anonymous03/08/11
Another from Brisbane, highly erotic and well written - very envious of Owen!!
A wonderful, original story told with great restraint and a slow build-up, just the way I like it. I'm eager to read the follow up.
Great JOB!
Thanks !
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Anonymous03/28/16
Fantastic! I luckily read 'Modeling Class' first so had a better understanding of the relationship. Just fantastic!
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Anonymous01/02/17
fuck you asshole orie for inserting gay material....
You asshole mother fucker Orie. You should warn readers about gay shit in your stories! What a disgusting piece of shit you are as an author. Not all of us are into gay shit mother fucker.
English
ugh
BORING!
Great starting story!
All I've got to say is that I can't wail till the party!!!!
I like the story
I like the way it goes slowly. Only don't include more people like Rita or Linda when Owen haven't had his cock inside Beckey's pussy yet. How about the shy Bridget, She could be included later on. And it would be nice if there are some humor included with sniffing of soiled panties, inhaling the women's musky pussy scent from the crotch of their panties and Becky get's embarrassed but excited.
Very well done!
Far from boring! You have a very interesting style. I envy your way with conversation. I like the way the women treat the naked male so casually. I hope you can keep it up! Well worth the effort, thanks
Nice one!
The Parisian interlude seemed a little wedged-in, but the rest of the story builds at a very enjoyable tempo. I can't wait for more.
And, IMHO, this is boring only in the sense that a drill might bore its way into a nice fresh hole. I'm looking forward to more of that kind of boring.
great stuff!
keep it going, please, and ignore all the negative b-s - this is very good writing, rich in detail, taking its time to get to the good stuff and keeping it real in terms of relationship and personality. reaaly enjoyed the second part, can't wait for more stories! thanks a lot!
fuckin lucky owen
From Brisbane. This entire series is senfuckinsational, and I loved it.
Another from Brisbane, highly erotic and well written - very envious of Owen!!
Great story
This was really great. Please, write more.
Superb Job
A wonderful, original story told with great restraint and a slow build-up, just the way I like it. I'm eager to read the follow up.
Great JOB!
Thanks !
Fantastic! I luckily read 'Modeling Class' first so had a better understanding of the relationship. Just fantastic!
fuck you asshole orie for inserting gay material....
You asshole mother fucker Orie. You should warn readers about gay shit in your stories! What a disgusting piece of shit you are as an author. Not all of us are into gay shit mother fucker.
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