All Comments on 'Captured'

This story is excellent. Keep up the good work. I'll continue

to look for more of your work.

Seemed very rushed and some elements didn't make much sense. Why did she wake up on the floor if there was an exam table in the room? Why give her a blanket if she wasn't allowed (not aloud, as the writer said) to use it to cover herself? Is it even possible for ceramic tile to conduct electicity? If Amber is really as prudish as the author would have us believe, why is she shaved? Seems incongruous.

I thought it was a great start, but it does leave one...unsatisfied, so to speak... looking forward to reading much more, hopefully a longer chapter? But love it so far...

Great start to what promises to be a very erotic story

Write more please!

AS SOMEONE NAMED AMBER THIS IS PERFECT