it is never good when drunk to much like nonconsent to easy for one or both to regret it keep it to sober only from now on
I know after a few hours of sleep there isn't much of a buzz left. Some of the best sex I've ever had is coming down off a buzz, lol.
You need an editor badly. The story premise was great, but, keeping up with the story was hard because of the wrong words.
Get an editor. Looks like you typed one handed.
good story but needs an editer. but if i wrote a story it would need two editers so donnot feel bad.
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never good
it is never good when drunk to much like nonconsent to easy for one or both to regret it keep it to sober only from now on
Nice :)
I know after a few hours of sleep there isn't much of a buzz left. Some of the best sex I've ever had is coming down off a buzz, lol.
Nice story, but.....
You need an editor badly. The story premise was great, but, keeping up with the story was hard because of the wrong words.
iliterotica?
Get an editor. Looks like you typed one handed.
needs editing
good story but needs an editer. but if i wrote a story it would need two editers so donnot feel bad.
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