All Comments on 'Planting Seeds'

For a come-back tale, this was Excellent.

Characterisation was good, though necessarily brief, the situation adequately described, action was as expected, and while it leaves an option to continue, I would believe your talent lies in single situational pieces, like this. A continuance would be painful.

Cheers and Well-Done

Kilroy

what a great little story. Nicely written and intriguing scenario. Thanks.

I hope you write more.

I really liked this story...please do continue! Perfect wording to make me tingly ;)

I loved it. I hope you add another chapter quickly. I can't wait to see what happens next. You did an excellent job!

I hope you write more of this story. Please don't end it like this.

I found this highly readable and a lively piece.

sensual and erotic XD

Would be great to conclude this story, so very intriguing.

This was good, I would like a part 2.

It would be nice if she suspects something and pretends to take the drug and plays along feigning sleep to be aware next time. Then things could get fun as she resents her hubby more and more but craves the brother

Very hot! Your write very well. I would love to read more if you put up another chapter.

Please continue, I would like to know what happens next

Keep Writing, I would like to read more about this story.

It's a good idea with many direction possibilities. Keep it up, I'd love to read more.

I would love to read if he succeeded to impregnate and steal the brothers wife. So please continue.

Great story. Looks like Damon will be victorious and fruitful! Too bad Lawrence won't survive the war.