All Comments on 'The Freshman Ch. 14'

especially the girlfriend use of the belt!!!

If this be love ....

Just as well she did not hate him .......

This story is old, so I’m probably only commenting for my benefit and a few others like me who have come across it so late. I love the story and enjoy the process the characters are going through. Even though it’s fantasy and fiction, I find the people mostly believable. This chapter, though, seemed off, because it doesn’t seem like Jason would try to get a tattoo behind Cecilia’s back. They’ve come too far and become too close. Still, it’s a small thing, and I’m off to read the next chapter!