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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/28/13

ok i have some criticism for this

1) there's a huge logic flaw. the alien scientists don't see humans as sentient, even though it's stated that humans had a civlization and made vibrators. how can they not see humans as sentient???
2) you don't even describe what the aliens look like. for all we know they could just be advanced humans that think human cum tastes like food
3) where the fuck do the children go before they turn 18? and why pick our legal age for keeping them as livestock? i'd think aliens would start as soon as humans hit puberty to start harvesting their cum.

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by jott5010/08/14

deliciously evil.

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