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amusing
I suspect a certain protion of the Lit reading public will be up in arms about this story, but I found it amusing.
JPB does have a way with words.
Those readers.
That accuse JPB of writing the same type of story? Well this story is slightly different from the others. It should also be in Satire and Humour section.
A different kind of cuckold!
Nice reading! This certainly was a different twist.
I agree it should be under humor & satire!
Thanks for writing!
Are you ever going to run out of...
....abhorrent characters or hypocritical protagonists? Will real health care reform occur in my lifetime? Is "just plain bob" the new name for john wayne bobbit after the wife got to him? I see a conspiracy here...
Interesting and amusing
Personally did not take it seriously and enjoyed it.
A bit different
A nice approach to have a surrogate husband. He has nothing to lose so he plays it cool. He gets in on the fucking so he is happy. I would observe that Rachel is not a very likable person. She is taking advantage of her husband whether he knows it or not. Neither is her coworker. He is taking advantage of the situation as well and he doesn't even like her. I guess I can understand the one night, getting caught up in the fun of the game. But why would you want to get hooked up with someone you don't like in a long term arrangement. Further, to tie your business opportunities into the mess she makes? He's living dangerously for a piece of ass once in a while. No other women available? I guess that's a theme in JPB stories that bothers me. The poor guy can never find someone else so he ends up miserable or back with the slut wife or hooked up with a loser like Rachel. There are too many women out there to choose from. Maybe they aren't all winners but these guys KNOW the one they were with is a loser. It's like buying a lottery ticket after the drawing and picking the same numbers you already lost with. A new number might not be the winner either but why choose the one you KNOW is a loser.
Did JPB use a different plot device or did the author re-arragne the characters?
Perhaps someone will think this JPB effort is different but is it? You still have a wimp husband married to the very typical JPB slut-wife but instead of the usual lover, we have the slut wife doing a business associate as a whore for more sales orders [instead of the wimp husband's boss or drinking buddies]. Not much different but just like a table arrangement - change it around and it looks different but it still has the same smell. Creativity score is still zero. Plot devices - no real change. No resolution, no getting caught - just another typical JPB with the slut wife getting away with adultery as usual.
Humor & Satire indeed
I agree, as has been said this isn't really a loving wifes story. Feels to me like the lead male is trying to justify his actions with anger and non-commitment. I'm oke with him being confused and mixed feelings but right now it just seems like he is lying to himself.
This one hit the spot
JPB gets a bit weird for me sometimes, although his writing is good and his imagination really wild. This one was even pretty believable - perhaps helped by my automatic suppression of a logic button as soon as I read JPB. Anyway, a good 5 star read.
I am sorry; I don't believe any of it.
Normally I give such impossible stories 1*. However, it is such a cute story I don't have the heart to rate it less than 3***s.
Delightful
Except for the negative comments on a VERY tongue-in-cheek tale. Get a life! Read Readers Digest instead of LIT! This was a novel depiction.
Of COURSE you don't believe it, DWarpnut! There are two great reasons you don't!
5*
And he let her get away with it?
Seems to me what he SHOULD have done (I love to change the ending or put a new ending to JPB's stories - it's so easy) was put her orders on the bottom of the pile, hired a PI to get her on video (not with him present), show that video to her husband and her boss and go to the Doctor to get himself checked for STD's and all the other various diseases a slut like that carries around. End to story.
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