Owning My Friend's Mom

Welcome back

Don't go missing again this site needs authors like you. got anything in the mind control realm?

EXCELLENT!

I certainly hope there will be much more to this story!

Wow!

Just came in the first three pages....can't wait to revisit this!!

wow

love the way the entrapment build getting her deeper under his control write more of this style very much liked it

wow

Please write the next chapter .. I love it.

WOW

That was a great story, please finish the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pretty Damn Good

Not usually a category I read, but this was an amazing story.

Great

That was an awesome story. I look forward to the follow up.

WOW

YOU MUST WRITE MORE... THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE GIVE US MORE-- FINISH IT .............
THANKS

Wonderful

Loved it!!!! Write more!!

Awesome!!!

This is running neck and neck with 'My Pet Teacher' as one of my all time favorite story. It's always a pleasant surprise when a truly talented writer takes a break and then suddenly reappears with more great material. Hope you submit more in the near future.

Great story

This is the best one i've seen on hear. Cant wait for the next installment. Will to see see how the master controls the household and gets Mrs C to let the world know Greg is her master....

that was great, can't wait to see what else you come up with, especially the daughter and mom helping. can't wait

Damn, what a story!

You're one hell of a writer.
I love how incredibly your style shows the whole situation as well as the little details. Also I liked that even Greg was surprised by how submissive Mrs C is.
And the part with Sara in the adult store was awsome.

I really hope that you will write more of this story.
This story definitly is one of my alltime favorites.

Outstanding

shit ,what a great story can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!

awesome

can't wait for the next part.....

Awesome Story

This is a very hot story. I liked the way Greg started slowly with Mrs. C. and then progressed onto heavier situations. Having Mrs. C. realizing more and more how submissive she truely is was fantastic.
The severity at the start of the spankings and the caning I thought was a little too harsh. Other than that it was a great story.
I hope to see more stories from you. I would love to know if Greg got Stacey under his control also. A mother and daughter combination would present some truely unique situations.

Friend's Mom

very well written...I read three of your stories...hopefully you will find the time to write more about Greg's adventure...the restaurant part was excellent as well, great character development...Please write more...

great story hope you continue it

Very Hot

Can't wait to see what Greg has in mind for Mrs. C and Stacy.

Best of All

You are one of mine and my wife's favorite writers here on lit. I hope you continue with all your stories. There are so many more things I would love to see your characters act out.

incredible

I just can't wait for part 2 with the daughter. keep up the great work!

Love it!

I can't wait to read the sequel with stacey!

love this story

I can't wait to read the sequel with stacey! I like your writing. Please keep it up thanks.

Fantastic! I like how you decided to leave the second acquisition for a sequel allowing to develop that story more fully.

It would be great if Stacey's training is more prolonged and riddled with lapses (after all, she has not yet been established as a natural submissive and I think it might be more interesting story-wise if she is very reluctant to get into the act).

Please

Hope it will be a continuation of this wonderful story.

the best

please continue

one of the best

absolutley one of the best i have read please carry on with the sequel

please i want more

I loved it and I want more, I want Stacey

Wonderful Read

Would like to see more of this story. Wonder if Stacey will be as willing to submit?

Best story I have read in years.

Thanks! That was hoooooooooot. The beginning more so than the end. I enjoyed the submission of someone who was totally unaware of their true desires. The not knowing if it would work made it very titilating.

Absolute gold please more

Title says it all. This is one of the best erotic stories I have ever read. Please write a second story or even more.

Great theme

The Story of Mrs C is exciting and fascinating. To think that she would, almost like an automaton, become an instant whore and slut to Greg. However, you are an excellent writer and would love to have more chapters to this story where Stacy and her girl friends are dominated by Mrs C who is dominated by Greg.

More please

I am not sure what to add, my title says it all. Great story, much room for a continuation.

love to read more

the story was great hope to see if Stacey is like her mother

Unbelievable

Why do writers in dominance and submission always have to pimp out the subs??? That destroy every story there is and is just gross. Sloppy seconds is a real turn off... You had a good story going up to the point where you decided to whore her out...

engrossed

ok I liked it and look forwards to finding how the daughter is involved? Will he encourage stacey to humiliate her mother or will he just try to trap stacey the same way as her mother?

Self-referencing is lame

I don't care if you did it to set a theme, pimping your own stuff is weak.

realy great

realy great stry when can we see the rest. i hope you include her daughter somewhere in it to

agree with anonymous at 08/24/11

The majority of stories about domination always takes a turn where the sub is "loaned". Maybe it's the reflection of the culture itself, maybe not. What I know is that I can't stand it. Too often than not I encounter it on stories that started without even a hint of it. There are writers that doesn't subscribe to that aspect, but they're hard to find.

meh

Not a great piece of work. I could not get into any of the characters, they had no appeal for me. The sex was okay, but nothing outstanding. I did not buy the hook where he got Mrs. C., it just did not seem to work. The referencing of your other stories was a mjor strike against it, it could have easily been avoided.

All in all, an average work at best. I have no interest in reading anymore of this series, assuming that any more ever get written.

loved it

loved the story, can't wait to find out what happens with the daughter, and possibly sara as well.

Long time reader....first time commenting

I'm not even into this genre and this story was amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter. Whew!

Amazing!

Well thought out and satisfying in so many ways!

Well Done

Loved every chapter. Great story, just keep it between the lines. Look forward to future stories. Will bookmark this Author.

Oh

Oh a lads dream, I'm not into pain (giving or receiving ) so have some problems about all of this, but as a whole it was very good thought the people were quite well thought out, just a bit to quick to get into it all but it is a story..

Amazing, Incredible, Fantastic

One of the best stories I have ever read, Only thing that could make it better would be if Mrs C was his Mother instead of the neighbour. I'm so so happy you are addressing that little kink in the near future. Can't wait to read the next instalment.

I don't like sharing from dommes at all, although the Sara input was okay. The rest of the story was good, and hope to see Greg start to work on Stacey too.

Great Story

Great story, I look forward to reading the next installment.

Grammar issues

You jump too often from third person to first person in your writing and it's a bit distracting. Fix it or get an editor to do it for you. Example:
"...Greg stood up and donned his clothes. Sara took her cue from me, and also dressed at the same time..."