All Comments on 'Working Out the Kinks Ch. 05'

by kellie_green_eyes

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imharmless69imharmless69almost 14 years ago
Fantastic even with the abrupt ending

Can't wait for what comes next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Absolutely enjoyed it. Well done Kellie

Loved all the parts especially the first and second making me hard and horney straight away.. imagine how many times I had to masterbate while reading this story.. haha. Love you Kellie.. cant wait to read more..

mazzmemazzmeover 12 years ago
Bravo!

Eloquently written, with outstanding diologue and cheeky personality. Well detailed and risque story line that had part of this reader giving you a standing ovation, and craving more after each thread.

Loads of lustful admiration for the author!

Ciao,

Mark

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Write more lol

Ch. 6? Lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

can someone perhaps the provider read or monitor my computer

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

No next chapter dropped to 3 stars.

Too many authors drop a series in the middle or worse yet never finish a story letting readers hanging.

Bill S.

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