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Mom's College Visit

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by Anonymous

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by Kamattlock03/02/10

Ok

The story was good until the end.

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by Anonymous03/02/10

Four Stars..

...but yeah, kinda weak at the end.

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by Anonymous03/02/10

Sorry

But she is just a middle aged slut now, no love or feelings here. Yuck.

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by Anonymous03/02/10

Good story...

But, some people aren't going to like the end where Jenny has sex with Nate.

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by sexmate03/02/10

Story was good but...........

Needed more details to make it great and the ending was to rushed!

Thanks for writing!

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by kathy2b4603/02/10

wonderful

i loved it so hot taking her son and getting more .
it could be true was it?

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by Anonymous03/02/10

You fucking Rock!

I love this story! It's almost as good as the amnesia of Beth's father series!

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by Anonymous03/02/10

Please write more of the story, its great!

Great story, please write more, as its hot!

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by Anonymous03/03/10

Liked it up until ...

it turned into a group sex story. It just had too many elements going on all at once. Mom ends up in bed with her son, that seems like an extreme transition all on its own. Then suddenly, she's part of a foursome that includes her son. Too much, too soon.

The writing was good though, good descriptive passages.

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by chargergirl03/03/10

Great story, seth!

And as always, off the charts on the hotness scale. xo

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by Plainly_Jane03/03/10

Seth Man

You did a good job, especially the first half of the story. I liked the way you quickly set up the Mom character - frustrated wife, husband too busy for sex or to go have fun with her, and then she's off for a week-end. The cop pulling her over and giving her something to fantasize about later was also really good and felt natural. I really liked the description of when she wakes up in the night to find she's having sex, that it's not just a hot dream. Very vivid depiction!

I won't touch the final bit of the story, since that's not my thing and it wouldn't be fair to give my opinion.

You have a really good writing style for this genre - you cut to the chase fairly quickly but yet you still give the reader a good basic mental picture of the main players. I think that's important ;) Nicely done.

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by Konyha03/06/10

Mmmm..luscious

I have missed your stories. You are the Master of erotic short story telling. I don't mind more than one partner however for some reason in an incest story I like those who join in to be family members. Either way your stories keep me at the computer and squirming in my seat.

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by osufan357808/24/11

What a fantastic story. Another true example of a woman acting out on her true feelings. It's unfortunate that such feelings are not accepted in culture today. I'm sure there are plenty of people out there who have these desires and urges. I enjoyed this very much!

Thank you.

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by homerjay09/08/12

mom son friend

the best combination

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by Anonymous07/31/13

fuck

I loved it until the son's friend started fucking his mom at the end.. thats some bullshit.

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by Anonymous10/03/14

yes

a very good mother

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by Anonymous11/02/14

Fucking hot !!

O my I love this story !!!! :)

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by Anonymous11/18/14

hmmmmm

A great Love story OK a great SEX story


RON TEXAS cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

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by Anonymous05/10/15

sequil

How about a follow up story this one was so good.
Ron
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by Anonymous09/29/15

could have been better

it was good but the sharing brought it down a couple of points. She was there to spend time with her son, not to spend time with her son and the whole world.. For me, it could have been better if she had kept it just the two of them.

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by Anonymous01/05/16

I can relate

I dropped my son off at college and met a dreamy stud in a fast food restaurant before I got on the road home. I spent the next 4 hours fucking him and his roommate in every way. We never exchanged last names. I got away with it and enjoyed doing things to them and having things done to me that my husband won't even consider. I guess I'm a slut mom. Oh well...

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by Kookaburra812/24/16

From a loving mum to a fucking slut..

A good ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ storyline at the start ....BUT unfortunately you killed this story for me with your ending. From a loving mum who didn't want to share her son to fucking slut and so much for the sons love for his mother as well. Sorry a lucky ⭐⭐⭐....

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by Anonymous01/31/17

wow

mom is a scum of the earth slut. you couldn't pay me to fuck that whore. sickening

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This was...

Well... I can't understand but it seems not many are fans of MILFs and don't know how to shut up if they can't say anything nice at all. Great story.

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