by StrictDom
story starts out well, but the main part is not detailed. If you write a BDSM story and you describe a whole hour in one sentence ("For the next hour or so, He whipped, spanked, tickled and fucked me."), there is not much to read ...
I like what's going on in the story, but as was said before, it could use some more detail.
You're a terrible dom. My Master is very loving and gentle with me outside of sex and takes good care of me and I know I can trust him to never put me in a situation I can't handle. You just seem like a cruel person. You should be ashamed of yourself.
But hey, if you want to respond to this. Immortalvampiricshadow@gmail.com
Your short story haze, a filthy fog, drunk with lust.