All Comments on 'Birthday Girl Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Birthday Girl

Easily your best group of stories yet. I'd love to see this storyline blossom into a lengthy series because well-written anal sex stories are hard as shit to find. Keep up the good work Damon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Truly Hot

Love all your stories but this one was really hot. Well written, drew one along to follow this wonderful hot, nasty girl. Continue the series please!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Incredible. And Hot!

Arousing is an understatement! You've fleshed out some wonderfully vivid characters doing the most deliciously -and lovingly- carnal acts imaginable. If you ask this girl's opinion, in the next Volume, Krista and Damon need to hook up officially, and ditch Sam the cheating, whining loser. Any idiot too stupid to not value such a heavenly beauty doesn't deserve her. Period. The guy's a cheatin' D-Bag. Krista can do WAY better than him (his name is Damon).

Great Chapter. Krista and Damon deserve each other. Officially.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
you make me soooo...

and besides that I'm hopelessly in love with your Damon character...

Great work, I love all your stories. It's rare to find stories that are this well written and this dirty at the same time...

Love it love it, sure to get me off everytime...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

for a sec, i was actually gonna look him up on fb to check his bday and see when the next party is gonna be. Very well written

Fredmb1971Fredmb1971about 13 years ago
can't wait

This story is great, can't wait for it to be continued

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I want the next chapter! Please, Damon!

GirlintheMoonGirlintheMoonover 12 years ago
Hot!

I really enjoyed it. I loved Krista's behavior, and a few of her actions had me smirking and laughing, myself. This undoubtedly added to the hotness of the ending. Thanks for such a hot, great story!

tnadnudertnadnuderover 10 years ago
Problems & Time

It bothers me when stories claim, "To be continued", & then there's nothing years later.

Also, hopefully by now, you've learned beyond making those grammar, spelling, & other mistakes I noticed in both of these stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Cont.

OP is a faggot. Continue, bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wow

Very good. Congratulations.

brian_scoobybrian_scoobyover 2 years ago

Liked it... need another chapter or two or three... thanks

PurplefizzPurplefizz10 months ago

Definitely needed finishing, but after all this time I think that’s wishful thinking, still great storyline though.

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