I think this series is one of the best and hope that the author will continue with another chapter soon.
Thanks for the good read.
Rich
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Anonymous03/05/10
Hey Joe!!
It's a shame that this chapter is so short because this is yet another of your great stories. Too bad that everyday life has to interrupt your writing because you have a real talent for this genre of story. Please don't keep us waiting too long for Chapter #4. P.S. another chapter of Joel and Carrie wouldn't be bad either.
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Anonymous03/05/10
Next Chapter
Dont make us wait another 4 months for the next chapter!!!
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Anonymous03/05/10
Whew!
Love the story, nice buildup over the first three chapters. Plenty of directions to take each of the characters - Mom, Brian, Lisa, cousin(s), Uncle James (tightass), and the girlfriends. Keep up the good work, hope the next few chapters are abit longer and hotter. So much, and so little time!
by
Anonymous03/08/10
Long wait
But it was worth waiting for! Hope you come out with another chapter!
by
Anonymous03/18/10
Very nice and exciting
This is a very nice and exciting story. The way the conversation goes I think what a lot of us liked it. Please continue the series with casual conversation with some teasing about sniffing dirty panties or just wearing short t shirts and no panties around the house while bending down to pick up something showing hairy pussy. Or at the close fenced backyard doing gardening with casual talk while wearing only a short t shirt or a bra with no panties and the brother or the son playfully sniffs the sweaty hairy pussy of the ladies and with some comments of musky and some laughter. Or all the three of them go to church together looks prim and proper but that nobody around them except the son and brother knows that the ladies are not wearing panties under their skirt.
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Anonymous06/14/10
Wow
Wow, this is such a great story. I'm really loving it. Started with chapter one yesterday. Every chapter is very hot and the light domination is so exciting.
I love that he is being just what his mother needs. She deserves to be happy with her son fulfilling her desires, and filling her womanhood with his cum.
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Anonymous03/27/15
Brian's got exactly the right attitude
It's just common sense. He's the male of his little family. He's the one with the cock. And this boy knows where his hard young cock belongs. Up his sister's sweet little slit and right up his own mother's warm wet ever-loving cunt. At his age, Brian's young balls never quit, they just keep on producing creamy semen that the kid's got to blow off somewhere. Well, nature provides. There are two perfect receptacles for the boy's endless supply of semen, and, would you believe it, they're right up between his sis's legs and his mother's legs. Family twats for family sperm. It's just common sense.
English
Wonderful story
The first 3 chapters of your story are fantastic, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
A very good imaginative story
Well done!
I think this series is one of the best and hope that the author will continue with another chapter soon.
Thanks for the good read.
Rich
Hey Joe!!
It's a shame that this chapter is so short because this is yet another of your great stories. Too bad that everyday life has to interrupt your writing because you have a real talent for this genre of story. Please don't keep us waiting too long for Chapter #4. P.S. another chapter of Joel and Carrie wouldn't be bad either.
Next Chapter
Dont make us wait another 4 months for the next chapter!!!
Whew!
Love the story, nice buildup over the first three chapters. Plenty of directions to take each of the characters - Mom, Brian, Lisa, cousin(s), Uncle James (tightass), and the girlfriends. Keep up the good work, hope the next few chapters are abit longer and hotter. So much, and so little time!
Long wait
But it was worth waiting for! Hope you come out with another chapter!
Very nice and exciting
This is a very nice and exciting story. The way the conversation goes I think what a lot of us liked it. Please continue the series with casual conversation with some teasing about sniffing dirty panties or just wearing short t shirts and no panties around the house while bending down to pick up something showing hairy pussy. Or at the close fenced backyard doing gardening with casual talk while wearing only a short t shirt or a bra with no panties and the brother or the son playfully sniffs the sweaty hairy pussy of the ladies and with some comments of musky and some laughter. Or all the three of them go to church together looks prim and proper but that nobody around them except the son and brother knows that the ladies are not wearing panties under their skirt.
Wow
Wow, this is such a great story. I'm really loving it. Started with chapter one yesterday. Every chapter is very hot and the light domination is so exciting.
short but so sweet
I love that he is being just what his mother needs. She deserves to be happy with her son fulfilling her desires, and filling her womanhood with his cum.
Brian's got exactly the right attitude
It's just common sense. He's the male of his little family. He's the one with the cock. And this boy knows where his hard young cock belongs. Up his sister's sweet little slit and right up his own mother's warm wet ever-loving cunt. At his age, Brian's young balls never quit, they just keep on producing creamy semen that the kid's got to blow off somewhere. Well, nature provides. There are two perfect receptacles for the boy's endless supply of semen, and, would you believe it, they're right up between his sis's legs and his mother's legs. Family twats for family sperm. It's just common sense.
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