by jaxrobert
You hurried this story and then stopped it before the real ending. Please try again.
But the beginning was unrealistic (not that erotic fiction HAS to be realistic, but it's a lot hotter if it speaks to our own sense of the possible). I've spent lots of time on nude beaches, and I've never seen a man get an erection while undressing.
So it's OK for them to rub each others genitals and get aroused but as soon as an onlooker gets aroused he has to move on??? And then you talk about his hard on because of the voyeurism? You contradict yourself.
It's so hot to see another man being turned on by your naked wife. Great story!