All Comments on 'Nude Beach, the Beginning'

by jaxrobert

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
too short

You hurried this story and then stopped it before the real ending. Please try again.

RyeandGingerAyleRyeandGingerAyleabout 14 years ago
Good premise

But the beginning was unrealistic (not that erotic fiction HAS to be realistic, but it's a lot hotter if it speaks to our own sense of the possible). I've spent lots of time on nude beaches, and I've never seen a man get an erection while undressing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I like nudist stories

good story needs more fucking

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Not realistic

So it's OK for them to rub each others genitals and get aroused but as soon as an onlooker gets aroused he has to move on??? And then you talk about his hard on because of the voyeurism? You contradict yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

MORE!?

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Nevet

He never took the next step, his.mom took his tablet away.

eaffinityeaffinityover 3 years ago

It's so hot to see another man being turned on by your naked wife. Great story!

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