All Comments on 'A Life in a Day'

What the fuck did that to her? I love stories that give you stuff like that to think about. Interesting concept, well written, fun and sexy. Also nice to see stories that length, which get the point across without bogging down in minutiae.

please make atleast a follow up and tell us what is doing this

This definitely needs a sequel. Terrific work, perhaps a little longer next time and more developed, but a terrific work. Highly recommended and we hope that other similar stories will be coming soon.

will she ever find out what is getting her pregnant?

please continue on with the story... what is getting her pregnant

oh plz tell me ur gonna write more whats getting her pregnant and how come she cant remember what it is

Really enjoyed it.

Fuuucking hot story.

wow

I'd love to read a backstory to this.