It was very good the first read I was allowed, and now it is even better. Damn, I am jealous of fictional Chris now...heh
I look forward to the journey you have started, bravo.
Val
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Anonymous06/11/10
Fantastic
Very much enjoyed your story. Was perfectly written, in the essence of making it seem that the reader was in fact Chris and the build up was exquisite. Can't wait for the continuation of this story. Hopefully he is lucky enough to eventually get back together with Eva.
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Anonymous07/05/10
Marvelous
Fantastic build-up with a bittersweet finish, but hope for the future. Just great. Hope you continue the series.
English
Let's hear about Joni
Great story. Keep it up!
Looks great
It was very good the first read I was allowed, and now it is even better. Damn, I am jealous of fictional Chris now...heh
I look forward to the journey you have started, bravo.
Val
Fantastic
Very much enjoyed your story. Was perfectly written, in the essence of making it seem that the reader was in fact Chris and the build up was exquisite. Can't wait for the continuation of this story. Hopefully he is lucky enough to eventually get back together with Eva.
Marvelous
Fantastic build-up with a bittersweet finish, but hope for the future. Just great. Hope you continue the series.
Superb
One of the best I've read on Lit. Well developed characters and the journey was as exciting as the sex was hot. You've a great gift for this.
Yay Joni
I was going to ask for Joni but when I scrolled down here, there she is. You rock.
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