All Comments on 'Erica's Debut Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wonderful

Great story so far, it's only been a couple of months since your last posting so I am hoping you are just busy with real life and not abandoning the story. Really, you are doing a good job, please keep it up. (no pun intended)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
When will it be continued?

It definitely needs to be continued! You can't leave us just hanging, lol!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good story gone to hell

I was really enjoying this until you introduced the Doctor character. Why? It just got stupider and stupider.

beretta84beretta84over 7 years ago
part 4?

it's been 6 years, or so, it should be ready by now.

liz33ndliz33ndabout 6 years ago
ya lost me on this installment

i got lost now, i don't think i will finish it, i don't know where this came from and not interested how it plays out. sorry, it is like as if the Dr. is making the calls now, nothing to do with the original couple.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Really unfortunate not to see a continuation to this story.

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