You don't do this if your in love, I would have been on the next flight back and divorced. If this was a stroke story it didn't work for me.
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Anonymous03/08/10
Sad
Sad how a marriage can be destroyed and never fixed...Many couples
find this out...some stay together but most do not...Being together
but not together is a sad way to live...You both broke it and only
together can you fix it...It sounds like yours has truly died...For this
I'm sorry...
by
Anonymous03/08/10
What did you Think...
...would happen. He was old enough to have heard all the stories; however, he lay awake realizing that she also was awake and thinking. He knew, he had to let her try and he knew, a sick feeling, that she would be forever changed. Being back and her somewhat aloofness, the taste of her mouth at times...you bet, she was fulfilling a need.
No need for a second chapter but, you could write one, she'll end up being a black mans Bitch, he'll become a wimp, a cuckold, at least for awhile and then, if he has any balls, he'll remember sadly how they were once so much in love...Once...now she was in constant black lust, he would leave, broken and sad!!!
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Anonymous03/08/10
Too Sad
Another broken marriage....why not just get a divorce and move on!
....on the same old cuck shit. Still don't work pal.
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Anonymous03/09/10
This guy is a stupid ass
Might just as well call it quits, his marriage will never be the same. He's got a black cum slut for a wife. Quit while you're ahead. No looking back, it's too late. Not a bad read author, a good warning to the asses who think they love their wives enough to let them do these stupid things. I don't feel a bit sorry for a stupid ass like this. Good thing this is a fiction story. lol
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Anonymous03/09/10
Gone over
Yes you have lost your wife. She is no longer satisfied with you small organ. She is in need and has obviously found other black lovers to satisfiy her. That is why your sex life has gone downhill. She is now cheating because she found out she was cheated by you for 20 years of under performing sex. Now she is making up for lost time. Either leave her or live with it. You agreed to your experience on your Jamacian holiday. You should of left pandora's box unopened. nice story thanks for sharing.
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Anonymous03/09/10
i liked it
I liked your story. It had a sense of realism to it. Things didn’t turn out so good. You stuck the knife of humiliation in real good. A man is thinking of providing an exciting experience for his wife and she winds up totally swept away. I think it is a bit unreal to agree to something like that on such short notice. I would think it would be something you would have discussed for months or years and tried out in bits and pieces first . it would be exciting in your story if you built up more tension for the event over time. But I can see the event was now or never.
Sex is in the mind not just equipment . for some reason men writ stuff from the point of view of competitive equipment and this equipment mesmerizing women. it seems to be men’s big fear. but I think you could have pointed out more clearly that when it started their tongues were seemingly better which didn’t fit the equipment thesis. We can only conclude that she was mentally into the situation dripping with anticipation. If questioned you might find out that she has always had a thing for black men but never acted on it. Any race that is different does the trick . its like a french accent on Americans - the difference is exciting. I think it was the anticipation and thought of the size rather than the actual fact and it would have been interesting for you to bring this psychology out in the story more. The danger, the questions the tension all conspired to make it memorable. If the men in your story were professionals then they were probably very handsome and this was probably more of a turn on than penis size. The cuts of humiliation are deep indeed when she is in love with their youth and beauty. Everything is ruination for the husband.
One more thing about penis size. With women I think penis physical size is only part of the turn on. The other part is that in sex or love a woman wants to give and please. When she is dealing with a large penis she feels , maybe without realizing it, that she is sacrificing and giving more. This is a tremendous turn on so long as it is not so big it’s painful. But again this is a mental thing. Since I am not a woman you may take my comments with a grain of salt.
Since this is only a story I think you have pointed to the future is bleak. The man knows now that he will never be number one again in bed - you have some interesting ways to go with this story. Don’t let the negative comments get to you. Good luck. Again I liked it.
Good sex descriptions. Probably should have been proof read. You did not describe your wife. Does she have nice skin, legs, pretty face? Was she sexually curious? Was this a spur of the moment thing or something that was planned. Was your wife sexually curious, slutty or a sweet innocent girl? That helps. I have written a few stories and people loved my 'girl' because of how I built her up.
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Anonymous03/17/10
Wonderful story
I loved this story. Keep up the great work!
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Anonymous09/25/11
Selfish
Dont be so selfish! You should be finding black cock to satisfy your wife. accept your place cuckold!
English
Personally
You don't do this if your in love, I would have been on the next flight back and divorced. If this was a stroke story it didn't work for me.
Sad
Sad how a marriage can be destroyed and never fixed...Many couples
find this out...some stay together but most do not...Being together
but not together is a sad way to live...You both broke it and only
together can you fix it...It sounds like yours has truly died...For this
I'm sorry...
What did you Think...
...would happen. He was old enough to have heard all the stories; however, he lay awake realizing that she also was awake and thinking. He knew, he had to let her try and he knew, a sick feeling, that she would be forever changed. Being back and her somewhat aloofness, the taste of her mouth at times...you bet, she was fulfilling a need.
No need for a second chapter but, you could write one, she'll end up being a black mans Bitch, he'll become a wimp, a cuckold, at least for awhile and then, if he has any balls, he'll remember sadly how they were once so much in love...Once...now she was in constant black lust, he would leave, broken and sad!!!
Too Sad
Another broken marriage....why not just get a divorce and move on!
Variation # 1237-b.....
....on the same old cuck shit. Still don't work pal.
This guy is a stupid ass
Might just as well call it quits, his marriage will never be the same. He's got a black cum slut for a wife. Quit while you're ahead. No looking back, it's too late. Not a bad read author, a good warning to the asses who think they love their wives enough to let them do these stupid things. I don't feel a bit sorry for a stupid ass like this. Good thing this is a fiction story. lol
Gone over
Yes you have lost your wife. She is no longer satisfied with you small organ. She is in need and has obviously found other black lovers to satisfiy her. That is why your sex life has gone downhill. She is now cheating because she found out she was cheated by you for 20 years of under performing sex. Now she is making up for lost time. Either leave her or live with it. You agreed to your experience on your Jamacian holiday. You should of left pandora's box unopened. nice story thanks for sharing.
i liked it
I liked your story. It had a sense of realism to it. Things didn’t turn out so good. You stuck the knife of humiliation in real good. A man is thinking of providing an exciting experience for his wife and she winds up totally swept away. I think it is a bit unreal to agree to something like that on such short notice. I would think it would be something you would have discussed for months or years and tried out in bits and pieces first . it would be exciting in your story if you built up more tension for the event over time. But I can see the event was now or never.
Sex is in the mind not just equipment . for some reason men writ stuff from the point of view of competitive equipment and this equipment mesmerizing women. it seems to be men’s big fear. but I think you could have pointed out more clearly that when it started their tongues were seemingly better which didn’t fit the equipment thesis. We can only conclude that she was mentally into the situation dripping with anticipation. If questioned you might find out that she has always had a thing for black men but never acted on it. Any race that is different does the trick . its like a french accent on Americans - the difference is exciting. I think it was the anticipation and thought of the size rather than the actual fact and it would have been interesting for you to bring this psychology out in the story more. The danger, the questions the tension all conspired to make it memorable. If the men in your story were professionals then they were probably very handsome and this was probably more of a turn on than penis size. The cuts of humiliation are deep indeed when she is in love with their youth and beauty. Everything is ruination for the husband.
One more thing about penis size. With women I think penis physical size is only part of the turn on. The other part is that in sex or love a woman wants to give and please. When she is dealing with a large penis she feels , maybe without realizing it, that she is sacrificing and giving more. This is a tremendous turn on so long as it is not so big it’s painful. But again this is a mental thing. Since I am not a woman you may take my comments with a grain of salt.
Since this is only a story I think you have pointed to the future is bleak. The man knows now that he will never be number one again in bed - you have some interesting ways to go with this story. Don’t let the negative comments get to you. Good luck. Again I liked it.
Your Story
Good sex descriptions. Probably should have been proof read. You did not describe your wife. Does she have nice skin, legs, pretty face? Was she sexually curious? Was this a spur of the moment thing or something that was planned. Was your wife sexually curious, slutty or a sweet innocent girl? That helps. I have written a few stories and people loved my 'girl' because of how I built her up.
Wonderful story
I loved this story. Keep up the great work!
Selfish
Dont be so selfish! You should be finding black cock to satisfy your wife. accept your place cuckold!
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