All Comments on 'Her Shirt'

While the story did turn into a little laundry list of situations during a specific evening, the author did a good job of letting us know how she felt and the specific things that made this a turn on for her. The true and believable nature of the story kept me reading. It gave me a chubby and that's worth five stars.

I would have loved to be watching you... :)

This story was really stupid! In parts I felt like slapping her for being such a slut. Not turned on at all. If you actually did that in real life, I suggest you get professional help, cause you've got issues. And your writing wasn't very good either.

Hi Nadia-

This story was very erotic to me. My fantasies run along the same lines. And any real life experiences that parallel those fantasies are a huge turn on.

I love it when women dress in a revealing or semi revealing way in public like you did at Starbucks and at that club. But as a guy we normally don't know for sure whether the woman experiences any excitement or thrill from being seen that way like you did. Even if it's partly accidental...if the gal gets turned on from the experience and knowing that the guys that see her are getting pretty turned on as well, it could be kind of mind- blowing.This Summer I saw a girl in a resturant maybe mid to late 20s who was wearing a cropped tank top with fairly large armholes ... a very exciting view from the side since she also had fairly small breasts ... So a couple times as she moved her arms and shoulders I caught a glimpse of her breast and nipple from the side. Another girl I slow danced with at a wedding actually let me undo the top 3 buttons of her blouse toward the end of the dance before the band packed up.

I got incredibly turned on ... Then we got out on the dance floor again and she did nothing to re-button her shirt. A complete stranger! It would have been so easy just to get a room and she'd probably let me get her completely naked...to be totally honest It would have been incredible to have sex even though we were total strangers but that didn't work out. But she was pressing up against my erection slow dancing which kind of felt like we were having sex in a way. Plus I touched her breast for a brief moment...not just on the outside if her blouse. Her nipple was firm and protruding which made me think she was pretty much aroused. I was actually wishing I could kiss and lick her breasts. As far as having sex, That's another fantasy and doing it with a stranger--I have never done that yet...so anyway I just wish I knew you and if we were friends it might be hard to keep my hands off of you even though we might not have sex.... There's definitely plenty of other things you can do. Or if we were not friends...just met someplace ... if you also felt like doing it with a stranger like we would use protection of course....but maybe we both get to fulfill that intensely hot erotic fantasy. Hope I am not taking this too far. I know you are basically a conservative person and not wanting to be slutty or anything but you definitely have a very sexy imagination in your writing.

That was a fun story. I hope you write some more, perhaps some stories in which she decides to throw all her bras in the trash! Another idea is that she and her best friend dare each other (or their boyfriends or husbands dare them) and they throw all their bras in the dumpster right before the trash truck comes. Then they find out the hard way that their wardrobes aren't very braless friendly, which they find out the very next day when the four of them leave for a two week trip to Hawaii and stay in the same condo. I hope you write about that; I'm sure you'd do a great job, Nadia.

Hopefully you will continue..... this is a lovely POV... delicate and demur, I am left hoping our shy girl will push the envelope, describe her exposed 'bits' in much greater detail, allow the arousal to push herself further, and let her exhibitionism SHINE through!!

While entering a bar tucked away in the woods on the banks of a lake, a girl I had never met was sitting on the hood of a car near the front entrance. I am slight in build. a B cup. I don't have to wear a bra and rarely do. But the first thing you notice about this girl is her breasts. As I walked by her, she remarked that she liked my shirt. It had a picture of a popular male singer. She asked if I wanted to trade. To this day I don't know why I agreed. She whipped hers over her head. I was surprised to discover that she too was not wearing a bra. I hurriedly removed my shirt. She was slow in giving up her shirt. But she finally did. I noticed I got more than the usual offers to dance and more free drinks.