Showing It All Ch. 03

Only Four Stars This Time

This has been a really HOT story. I'm disappointed that you had to introduce anal sex into it.

Tom and Abi

I am really enjoying this story!! Please continue. I like where this is leading and I like your timing. Let things unfold at their own pace.

Ps. to the last commentator: if you don't have or want to use a condom anal sex is the closest to being in a ladies pussy!!

no need for chapter 4

you have convinced us that you are more than capable of writing pointless nonsense.

Captured the essence

of the young mind. The wording was as it should be in a story of young people. Keep writing.

Would have given 5 stars but...

I would have given this story 5 stars but the anal sex was a real turn-off for me!

Different strokes for different folks.. gave it a 5 because of the anal sex.


Not to nitpick too much but "prone" is face down, "supine" is face up so the word you wanted for the shower scene is supine.

Great story !

Five Stars

Adding the anal sex was a great touch ! Looking forward to the next chapter

Great Story

Great Story - and I loved the addition of anal sex.
Looking forward to Chapter 5 ....with anticipation.
soooo hot!!