All Comments on 'Mavis's Car Trip'

Didn't see that ending coming at all. Nice way to wrap up the theme of the contest. Good luck with your Earth Day entry.

Babs

I thought the content was good. Getting an editor would make your story read better.

Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.

It's a decent story, but as an Earth day entry it's very weak. The couple of mentions of climate change have nothing to do with the plot.

Hi there HP. It was Ok, but could have used a little more information why he was tied to the bed. Where she was headed, and what happens next. I do wish you luck in the contest.

DG

I expected the car adaptations to do *something* more to Mavis.

Og