All Comments on 'Lust in La Jolla Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Excellent Chapter 7

Jerry in SW Washington State, USA - Finally caught up on your story so far. Your frequent postings are very appreciated. It's hard for me as a reader to get involved in a multi-part story, because there have been several writers who have taken weeks or months between chapters and some have never completed their story. I get interested in multi-part stories because there is more time to develop the personalities of the characters. I begin to care about the characters, which is a bummer if the story is never completed or long periods between chapters. I much enjoyed Kari and Jake talking about their personal sexual experiences and their feelings about them. I still hope that Jake eventually gets with Jenny - feel there's a real connection there - but, short term, looking forward to the party and Jake getting with Maria sexually soon.

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