All Comments on 'A Night Out of Town'

by ali2teaseu

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
A great effort

Thanks for writing such a fine story. I could "see" you playing with the guy in the bar and loved the dialogue. Continue your wonderful writing. jr

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Good story

This is a very dangerous game to play but I found it to be quite interesting, and at least the wife didn't commit adultery. Well Done!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
ALL YOUR STORIES ARE GREAT!!!!

Hello, You need to write more stories, they are great!! I read them all...(sweet) Thank you...

bud01456bud01456almost 13 years ago
Nice job!

Keep it up, love to hear more about her teasing

tae352001tae352001over 10 years ago
erotic but excellent

Gave you 5 stars, found the back drop erotic, the character wife shared nothing with a man much younger than her husband, and left it at that. in my opinion the character was more into creating a highly charged night of passion with her husband and only her husband would benefit and enjoy. Bravo 5 stars

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