Dark Moon Ch. 01

Enjoyed the story!

I enjoyed your story. I look forward to other chapters.

Excellant start

This is clearly going to be a rare gem of a story, one where I care about the plot and characters as well as the sex. In fact, if this has no sex in it at all I'd probably follow it anyway. I look forward to you submitting the rest of it.

very good

I like it. there where a few grammar issues but not two bad. looking forward to more. thank you for sharing. Mechmanas

Enjoyable story

An interesting start

hmmmm

nice start. :) continue, continue.

Nice story, but

I liked this one. It is, as stated above, an excellent start. I did have one minor quibble. In the story is the line, "the full moon was four weeks away." It happens I am an astronomer. Full moons happen every 28 days. That's four weeks, so if the next full moon is four weeks away, the current full moon is happening right now.

liking this just a few grammatical errors

I was initially distracted by the 4 weeks to a full moon as most people are taught it as 4 weeks between. Having looked it up it is never quite the same time period and is averaged out to 29.5 days; so this would fit the story. Hope bdsmbill is just a lay astronomer would hate him to calculate if an asteroid was going to hit the earth or not

TOO FUNNY

I find it funny that Women are in charge, men are virginal and what a twist
loving it

Confusing

How is it that females can be as promiscuous as they want yet males must not be at all? Who exactly are the females supposed to be fooling around with if the males aren't available? Other females?