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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/15/10

This is strangely

very effective and passionate.

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by Anonymous03/16/10

You've stolen my heart. How am I supposed to get it back now? But i guess in all reality you cant steal something that i would've gladly offered. You continue to astound me with your talent and passion. Well done beautiful. It's great.

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by nofaceinthemirror03/17/10

I choose

to keep your heart forever with me, loving it, loving you. Guarding both as if my life depended on it. You taught me I could have a friend, and more, just maybe . . .

Time baby--Time

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