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Just Keep Walking

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/25/11

A great idea, well written

I enjoyed this imaginative vignette exploring what happened to a character in the mist. Nice one.

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by Anonymous09/29/14

what exactly was erotica about this?

Waste of my time

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by southwestcav11/18/14

Not erotic but so what? Great story.

This is more of a scene than a story but again so what. Well written and leaves me wanting more.

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