I had read it before, and enjoyed it as thoroughly this time as I had the first time. You have a nice style, creating people who are really enjoyable to get to know. I'm glad to see you're still writing; it's probably safe to assume you won't write any more of Familiarity Breeds Interest, but it would be nice to hear more about the characters.
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Anonymous02/06/16
Nice but where's the pepper?
You're a good writer and I like the story line and the scenario but you're short on the erotic which requtres a bit more embelishment. Next chapter maybe?
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Awesome story
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Love the story
Your writing is great. Please continue.
another great story
please write more
The CENTER of your appeal...?
I've decided it's the positive attitudes and behaviors of every one of your characters about sex.
It's a Win-Win-Win-Win-Win-Win!!!!!!
If you ever get to Music City....:+)))))))))
Please just at least one more chapter!
I just found your writings and I shall read them all. Wow, best stories on this site.
GREAT!!!
IMHO you are one of the best writers on this site, like the long build-ups.
Damn, I love this story!
I had read it before, and enjoyed it as thoroughly this time as I had the first time. You have a nice style, creating people who are really enjoyable to get to know. I'm glad to see you're still writing; it's probably safe to assume you won't write any more of Familiarity Breeds Interest, but it would be nice to hear more about the characters.
Nice but where's the pepper?
You're a good writer and I like the story line and the scenario but you're short on the erotic which requtres a bit more embelishment. Next chapter maybe?
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