Smile for Me

Like it.

I really like it so far.
I can't wait to read more.

nice start

good to see they get slapped up, haha. don't be long pls.

Very Good

Please continue. You have the beginnings of a good story line and one that a lot of people can relate to.

*****

Nice start.

great start where is the rest

great start where is the rest

we need more

I loved the start. And i'm glad they got there ass kicked a little lol

LOL at Irene for beating the shit out of cheating boyfriend

I love it and the fact that she set his shit onfire too...you go girl. Thanks

Strong out the Gate

The story keeps ones attention. Physically & emotionally capivating for me. It is going to be interesting to see how it continues to develop. You did not have to Bar-b-Que that man's contents:-)
But then again...he did kinda ask for it.
Keep up the good work.

funny

Just curious, why did the cheating boyfriend bring the girl to Irene's room and apartment? Was it one of her roomies?

Gimme More

Loved the intro, nice, believable story. Will be watching for part 2

enjoyed

I enjoyed the intro, really drew me in. Looking forward to the sequel

Nice Start

Now its time to get Irene and Garrette into each other and Maybe her friends can give her the Dirt on Drew and hie "redhead" Friend.
Guy must be clueless to Screw around in his Womans Apartment shared by 2 Others

TANTILIZING START

KNOW TO SEE WHAT COMES NEXT AND I AM SURE IT WILL BE GOOD

More!

I loved that. I'm hooked. I can't wait to see where you take it from here! Great start.

Nice Start

I like that you got the cheating boyfriend out of the way up front. The clichéd cheating boyfriend - good guy trying to win unsuspecting girlfriend plots are ridiculously overused. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this next.

Authors note :D

i know you guys who have read the first chapter are probably curious as to why in the hell its taking me so long to post..life has been crazy with school and work but dont worry i havent forgotten about you guys..i plan on posting a few more chapters before i start school again in august and im currently working coming up with characters for a new story as well so sit tight ill have the next chapter posted in a week or two =)

i like this chapter..

Just... WOW!

She is so done!
I wouldn't take him back either; she didn't hear about him cheating, she caught him!