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Unwrapping Candy

byFrederickJones©
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by Anonymous

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by michael195003/18/10

waiting

hope you have a chapter 2 coming.

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by Poizon6903/18/10

Foolish husband.

But then that's how you wrote him, isn't it?

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by gaesmo03/19/10

Really Stupid

Why in the world take a good marriage and a loving wife and take a chance on destroying both for a momentary thrill....your character is insane! I can only hope you have some twist that will prevent the insanity from being culminated.

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by newtype252503/20/10

Wow!

TYPE FASTER!
=D

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by Equality203/20/10

Looking forward to chapter 2

Excellent and well written story. Keep up the good work and ignore any negative comments from anonymous people who do not have enough intelligence to know that most stories posted on Literotica are fiction.

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by FrederickJones03/20/10

slight delay

I'm afraid part 2 has been returned to me by the editors for reasons unclear, possibly punctuation or grammar. I will rewrite it and get it back in immediately.

Fred

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by ythebadger01/11/13

I wondered if I really WAS "out of my fucking mind".

The answer is 'yes.'

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