This is powerful. Assault, even sexual, happens more among people who know one another. The victim here is more disgusted than afraid. I liked your oblique references to those disturbing feelings.
I also liked what you did with the line breaks and syntax.
Well done. Like your weird line breaks. It disturbs the eye the way your subject matter disturbs the mind.
Moving, and beautifully written. Well done!
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