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by Anonymous

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by 03/18/10

Hi

I liked it. thank you

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by Epmd60703/21/10

the ellipses

really wreck the poem. Other than that there's not much that makes the poem feel uniquely personal to the reader. Anyone could have written this, there's nothing that defines whatever Cloudy is as a poet or person.

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by sadangel05/12/10

Don't mind the trolls...

The ellipses do not distract from the poem at all. It tells me that there are things you left unsaid. Who can say it all in just a few words. Thank you for sharing this with us.

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