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by vrosej1003/20/10

Cool.

I like this. It sticks to images in order to convey meaning. Erotic and romantic poetry can be too abstract to be good but this one isn't.

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by fridayam03/25/10

I think you could go further

in the words you use. The idea is good, but look for words that get under your skin and prickle.

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