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Good, very good
Once in a while you do surprise me. Actually a story with an ending, and a good one. Very well written, with a nice twist at the end. Thanks.
Another Good Story
I am sure that the hero will be classified as an idiotic wimp for not going through with the divorce when she lost the baby and worse because he was not pro-active and then because he did not immediately go out on the dance floor to complain about the kiss and the wandering hands, of course he should have slugged Brad before Patty Ann dunked the jewelry. Lastly, obviously she should have kicked her out of his life because she held him up to ridicule! But still the story was enjoyable and would not have been so much fun if he had acted earlier! Thanks to JPB.
Thank You
I know I'm a romantic sap but I enjoyed this story very much. I usually read your work and appreciate the hard work that goes into writing an entertaining story.
For my taste this is one of your better ones. Thanks for your effort.
A happy ending,what else needs to be said
Well written as always and very believable. Just a good story, thanks
Nice story Rob.
I'm glad the good guy kept the girl. But still I do think more revenge should be brought on Brad. Anyway, good story. Thanks for writing.
Well done story. I enjoyed it a lot.
It is not always nessesary to kick the other Guy's ass. The turnaround was well done, and Brad got what he deserved.
Liked it
JPB thank you for your story. I liked it. Not qualified to critique the writing or the English. Just liked it. Jim
NO...
I tried to read this story. The husband's self respect wasw so low and his character so weak that I couldn't finish the first page. I would have trashed Patty as soon as she showed me who she was. Some people just love to be kicked in the ass. I'm not one of them. I don't know how the story ends and I don't care. I hate cucks.
What fucking cuck???
Good story, smart gal...
and here...
...I was hoping he'd end up with Bonnie...
good story
Thanks for the story. Sometimes we get loving wives in Loving Wives section.
Thanks for the entertainment. Mike from Texas.
Outstanding!
I am always impressed by the range of stories that you bring to this site. There no one who explores the various crazy situations that life can bring than you. Thanks!
One of your best
Rob was a true stand up guy that was willing to do anything for the girl he loved, even if it destroyed him. That is the best definition of selfless love there is. I am glad you made Patty Ann smart enough to see Rob for the gem he is. Well done.
This is why i love JPB....
he is known to write cuckold stories but he tends to write different scenarios, outcomes, etc.. that when I see a story posted by him, I'm not sure what i'm going to get so I read along.
Romantic?
It was a good story but as usual in almost all Loving Wives stories there were parts of the plot which made no sense. To the people that said it was romantic or a great love story, please! At the very least Patty was a shallow, self-centered person who didn't think about the feelings of the man she "loved" and was fortunate to have. Given that everyone knew about her past involvement with Greg it would be a given that it would get around that he was back in town and she had been seen with him. And what exactly did they do in those three weeks on their little excursions? Why did she have to have so much contact with an asshole that she supposedly hated to have her revenge. If she truly hated him she would have just put him down the first time he came to their house and then made sure that all their common friends knew how pathetic he had been. It is just a huge weakness in the plot but then again there wouldn't be a story without it.
The bitch is still a cheating slut no matter what she says about it.
Her complete attitude about Brad from the get go says she is a slut. She may have actually decided that her current sucker (the husband) was more reliable.
5***** story! One of the best! Original and Creative!
It is really nice to read a story with a happy ending and a husband that doesn't go on some drunking rage and make himself an ass seeking revenge.
Poor Brad! Not only did he get embarassed he wasted several weeks attempting to win her back. And, she was smart not to let him win her back because he cannot be trusted. He may have been after the thrill of the chase and if he caught her, most likely he would dump her again.
This is as romantic as JPB can ever bring himself to be.
That's pretty darn romantic though. *****Five stars
NEVER SELL YOURSELF SHORT
but always verify your options. TK U MLJ LV NV
No, no no.......YES!
5*. You really got me. Great to see a happy ending (except for Brad, lol)
One of the few Bob stories that I can stomach....
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On reflection
This is a common theme with Bob's stories. There are at least two with this premise: old BF is in town and she decides to rub his nose in it. Hubby finds out and is bereft.
Looking at it, I have to say that I do not like the women involved in these stories. Their husbands are considered, at best, collateral damage. These things can too easily explode and frankly, their explanations can easily be looked at as infidelity which wasn't totally caught.
In this instance, I'd let her win the run to the bedroom as I took off for a hotel room somewhere. If this relationship is all about game playing, well...two people can play and she really REALLY needs a fucking slap in the face of realty and taking people for granted.
She does NOT deserve this guy even a little bit.
Nothing exceptional,
but overall, I like the story. I disagree with FD45's comment tthat she doesnt' deserve him. I think the scene after he miscarriage demonstrates that she realizes she has ended up with the right guy.
Are you people nuts?
How the fuck can you see this as a romantic story? She shows nothing but absolute contempt for her husband, his feelings and their marriage. She sneaks around behind his back and cheats on him for at least 3 weeks! And I don't buy it when she says that she didn't fuck Brad. Brad is an arrogant ass, and he won't hang around if he isn't getting some. If a guy like that gives her jewelry to mark her as "his", then he will insist on "claiming " her in other ways, or else he will move on. Even if they didn't have sex, what she was doing was STILL cheating! Cheating isn't just a cock in a vagina - there are 100's of things that can be considered cheating, INCLUDING secret dates and clandestine meetings. INCLUDING kissing and groping. INCLUDING accepting gifts to say you are someone else's.
She never once gave a thought to her husband's feelings. She didn't give a second thought to publicly humiliating her husband in front of their friends.
I think the husband must be very naive and gullible to believe her bullshit story, because she has already proven she is a liar. She has proven she is self-centered. She has proven she is a manipulator. She has proven that her wants and desires come before ALL other considerations. Romantic it ain't!
One more thought
For all the romantics out there. If Patty-Ann truly loved her husband as she claimed, then why all the secrecy? If her CHEATING was all an elaborate revenge plan as she claimed, then why keep hubby in the dark? Why not tell him that she wanted to get back at her old boyfriend? Hubby loved her and would have helped in any way he could. Especially since she must have known how insecure he was when it came to her and Brad. So again, I ask, why didn't she enlist his help? Or was she secretly hoping Brad had changed and that the old spark was still there? I mean, there are a LOT of different ways to get revenge, so why exactly did she choose this way?
I hear a Roy Orbison song:
"Which one would it be?"
"You turned around and walked away with me."
Who loaded those tags???
HE WAS LOOKING BACK TO SEE
if the Deja-Vu is on the haunt/hunt. TK U MLJ LV NV
ROY! That was a great song.
And this was a good story with a decent ending. The only little problem I saw was that Patty could have simply gone to a lawyer and gotten a Court ordered DNA sample from Brad. Brad isn't going to be able to ignore a Court order. And when the baby is proven to be his, at the very least he'll be paying child support. Other then that glitch it was a good story.
Thoghts
As far as he and Bonnie goes, there’s nothing wrong with her seeing other guys as long as they both know the rules. And speaking about that, Bonnie has no bitch about Sue “moving in on her action” with Rob because they’re obviously not exclusive.
Patty should tell Brad’s mother that she isn’t “trying something like that” and she IS pregnant with Brad’s baby and the truth will come out sooner or later and it is better for everybody if it is sooner.
And she DEFINITELY fucked up not telling him about Brad being back. How she could NOT think he needed to know that Brad was back and what she planned is beyond me!
nice but sad
oh it was a happy ending alright. the good guy won a worthy spouse, the sad part was all the torment hubby went through in the interim. why, in the course of their 4 year marriage didn't he feel complete, loved, or appreciated, that he had a question, or a worry at how she would react? communication is so necessary in a marriage.
Okay
I thought that Patty was being a little two-faced about things. She gave him shit about his choice of women in college when she wanted no parts of him. She married him out of necessity but he still worried about Brad. I guess there was a happy ending but I just didn't like the way it happened.
Revenge Can Be Selfish
Of course she couldn't have just kneed him in the nuts when he showed up at the door and tried to kiss her. That kind of revenge just wasn't good enough. She had to invent some kind of ridiculous plan that could never work without hurting her husband. I mean come on, it was her idea to have Brad go over and tell her husband she was leaving with him. Never occured to her how her husband was going to feel when he was told this? Especially after dirty dancing with him, kissing him and letting him grab her ass? And in the four years they were married she never got around to telling him she had changed her feelings about Brad and she was now all his? Stupid but then I suppose a lot of women are.
She Sure Can Spread The BS Around
If he believes her BS, I've got a bridge in the middle of the Atlantic I'd sell to him, real cheap.
3*
Would have been 4 if he would have given her a hard spanking for fucking with his head too, letting Brad kiss her and grab her ass.
Well Damn!
JPB sure can write some pansy-assed, dumb-assed, stupid-assed, cuckolded wimp near males. His wife's been going off with Brad for 3 freaking weeks with all the history between them and he's going to believe her cock and bull story? FUCK this guy deserves to be cheated on and JPB once again proves he can out out cuckold Matt M.
Shit story, shit MC and a shit writer.
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