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Love Bites Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by deetimes03/21/10

MORE!

Please give us more... I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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by jadeanise2103/21/10

more

I'm in love you must write more. hurry hurry hurry please please please.

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by Anonymous03/21/10

More and soon

Please write more and quickly.

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by Anonymous03/21/10

Loving it

please write more, the more i read the better it gets. continue please!!

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by Anonymous03/21/10

Love it!

I love it! Great story so far! Cant wait to see what happens next! Please more and soon! Thanks!!

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by spearman103/22/10

Wow!!

Of course your gonna have to do Andrey's story if you don't include it into this one !! Your rockin' this story out!! Excellent starts! Keep up the great work!

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by catman7103/22/10

MORE PLEASE

GREAT TWINS AS MATES TO TWINS OH HOW THE FUN IS ABOUT TO BEGIN

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by Anonymous03/22/10

hooked!!!

cant wait for the next update!!!

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by Anonymous03/22/10

so happy

finally someone that can wrote a wonderfully love story that have more then just sex in it

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by puddlepaltoo03/23/10

Getting Better All The Time

Please keep it coming. The way to avoid all the your names starting with the same letter is to have a name reference site bookmarked and keep a running list in one of your word programs, like notepad. This has always helped me. You can also just make a list in a notebook.

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by Anonymous03/29/10

Great story

Thanks for a great update. Why can't she shift into a were? Why is she called a lioness if she is a were?

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by Anonymous04/14/10

oh my oh my

i love this.... your story has a nice flow and great people so far plz keep writing

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by jadeanise2104/22/10

when will there be more?

i really like this story and can see that it is headed somewhere good. when will you be writing more? i ope there will be more chapters to this story. keep up the good work.

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by cannd07/31/10

so I guess aleca is andrey's mate. keeping it in the family huh! It was cute how easily she accepted him. I look forward to you playing it all out as her friend and brother seem to think she is special even though she thinks she is defective. I'd love to see a bit of longer chapters. I like your choice of changing points of view. It works nicely.

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