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Desire too strong?

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by mojo2303/26/12

First poetry submission I have read must say I will read more. Lovely imagery "searching every curve hands and tongue wander" mmmmmmmm beautiful.

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by Anonymous05/30/13

Nice!

That is one of the better poems I've ever read.

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