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It's About Time ! !
Finally, the story where The Cock is The Star. In bed, it's all about sex. This short story was A Thriller. Thanks for writing. Ron
Experiment Gone Good
Nice one desirelit. Looking forward to reading about more of these "experiments". I am sure Tom will be released from the facility soon and utilize his assets to satisfy his selfish desires. There won't be a beautiful wife or nubile co-ed safe will there? Thanks for the read.
re: experiment gone good
Thanks for the encouragement! Yes, he'll be out soon and we'll have to see if he's able to display restraint and if women are able to control their desires. I think you know the answer to that, though. ;)
I'll second that!!
Finally a story where the Cock is the Star!! Yeah that the ticket!
Editing
I just wrote another chapter. When I write erotica, it's like a really detailed fantasy, and it really sweeps me away. I'm so aroused by the experience, and don't necessarily know what I'm writing while I'm doing it. The results of this can be seen in strange things I write, wrong word choices and bad grammar.
I haven't had much luck with the editor program here. Anyone want to volunteer to read a chapter and offer suggestions?
By the way, to those who felt other chapters were too short, this one is over 5000 words, which I think is about 3 times the length.
Bravo!
Wildly entertaining read my friend! I love it when prudish bitches have to take more cock than their body can accomodate! Thanks for the outlandish ride!
Great story, but couldn't finish it.
The story was starting to get really great, but you would benefit from having someone proofread your story for grammar and spelling.
I'm sorry.
Hey man, I'm sorry. I didn't even see your comment about asking for help before.
If you're still around, let me know, and I'll proofread it for you.
Rewrite time?
I've been thinking about taking this series, rewriting it as an ebook, and having more continuity, descriptiveness where appropriate and well checked spelling and grammar. Would there be an interest in such a thing?
more please great story
very cool story i hope you write many more chapters
Lacy learned what a 12 incher can do !
Tom taught Lacy thay 12 inches of dick in her pussy makes continuous orgasms for her and she turns into a slut who was once a doctor.She was much happier as the slut.Tom found his new dick was a toy for him and any women he wanted.Win/win situation.The author needs to write more stories.I came!Thank you!!
what a day at work!
oh to have a job like Lacey's
it would make the rubbish pay of a reaserch assistant worthwhile :)
Great start.
Where is the next page? THAT'S THE END?
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