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Geeze
Youre going tooooooo sloooooow. I just want to see what happens :(
great :)
I don't mind that you're going slow with the couple in the story, I love the slow development of the relationship. It is listed under the Romance category after all. If someone just wanted to read a story about a date and a quick fuck there are other categories to look under.
Keep up the good work! I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next. I am a bit nervous though... didn't Maggie want to go to the movies that night? She would recognize Ben wouldn't she? eeek
Update soon please!
Good Job!
I like the pace you're at and it's not really slow at all. I like the building of the characters and setting the scene; it will just make the big moment all the more special. Keep up the great work! :)
Love it!
Good job, the story is highly flirtatious and addicting. I like the development of the characters and their newfound budding relationship. Hope you have some more chapters to post so we can see where they go.
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the story sort of reminds me of me and my teacher
we were on really good terms. But still could'nt go ahead.Miss him.And LOVE your story
just don't make Ben go through hell for dating her please???pretty please???
ADDICTING
I really love this story, i wish i had found it when you had finished it though =p
im not the worlds most patient reader.
However, i have to say this is definitely my favourite story that ive read so far. Can't wait for your next installment :D
Keep up the great work!
Great!
I love this story it is my favorite by far! I hope you continue to write the series!
Amazing
Your work is amazing... the story is fluent, unpredictable, and, to my liking, going slowly... I love a story that teases the reader. Keep up the good work! I'm desperate for more.
more
more
LOVED IT
WENS THE NEXT ONE COMMING
Great Job.
I would love to read some more. I can't wait for the next chapter and hopefully it's soon! I love how slow it's going and the characters are really great. :)
OMG!
hurry with the next installment!! this is so amazingly cute!!!!
More?
This one is dated March 2010. Are you posting the next one soon?
Come on - Next Chapter please
A well written gentle story. Please finish it as I'm sure your story telling is better than my imagination
Please!
It's been 4 years! Finish it please!
Next chapter
Great writing, hope you continue the story, would love to see another chapter
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