The Denouncement Ch. 04

It Is A Work Of Fiction

As Anonymous 01/16/16 said to all of the commenters this is a story - that means it's Made Up! As in NOT TRUE! I enjoyed the story - view on the complexities of a relationship and the importance of sex in a relationship. 5*'s

Good but

Good story but would have been nice if the husband got dumped on his ass. Dude is a serious moron.

This dude is too damaged to be in any positive relationship

The litany of reasons alphabetically span from arrogance to vindictiveness (and beyond).

Throw in being part of the autism spectrum, self centered, lack of empathy, skewed set of morals, inflexibility, and lower mental capacity.

She should have stayed gone and chalked this one up to experience. There are going to be other minor and major issues he will not be able to fathom and get stuck on.

This guy can never have any sort of meaningful relationship with anyone, male or female. His brain is not wired for that level of socialization.

Good Until The Ending

Make a baby when they just got back together. I don't think so. A recipe for divorce or at least BIG problems down the rode.

This character is beyond hypocritical.

If Anything

after his first talk with his mother he should have gotten back with his wife and was willing to try all the things she left for. Instead he wallowed in self-pity and became such a hypocrite.

Rob turned into a gross man

She did destroy her marriage by her stupid ploy but Rob became unsympathetic towards the end.

I pictured a female in Rob's position and became ill.

Gail certainly needed a sharp slap but so did he.